The 2 Most Common Mistakes People Make When Writing With Keywords
by Karon Thackston
It really gets my blood pressure up. SEO copywriting has begun to get
a poor reputation all due to carelessness. How so? Because too many
people claim to know what they are doing. In reality, they simply shove
keywords into copy without any concern for how the copy flows. Copy that
sounds mechanical or stiff is a sure sign that an amateur writer has had
his/her hands in things.
When you write SEO copy, you should take the time to find out what works
and what doesn't. There are two mistakes almost every amateur search
engine copywriter makes. Let's take a look at each one.
#1 - The List
Let's say you visit the home page of a website that sells beauty
supplies. As you read the copy, you keep coming across a string of
items: hair salon supplies, hair salon equipment and professional
manicure tables. The copy reads something like this:
The Best Selection of Hair Salon Supplies, Hair Salon Equipment
and Professional Manicure Tables On the Internet
When you're shopping for hair salon supplies, hair salon
equipment and professional manicure tables, you need a vendor who
offers great selection as well as great service. Because buying hair
salon supplies, hair salon equipment and professional manicure
tables can be an expensive venture, you also want a company that
delivers the lowest price.
Trust ABC Beauty Supply to bring you the widest selection of hair
salon supplies, hair salon equipment and professional manicure
tables in stock every day. Orders are shipped within 24 hours and -
for all hair salon supplies, hair salon equipment and professional
manicure tables orders over $100 - shipping is absolutely free!
Do you see how that flows (or doesn't flow) when you use all your
keyphrases in a row every single time? One time, sure. That's fine. Even
twice, depending on the length of your copy. But to put all your
keyphrases in a list and use them every time you have the smallest
opportunity is just far too repetitive. What do you do instead?
Discuss each one in its own section. Talk about the various types of
hair salon supplies. Review the reasons your hair salon equipment is
better than that sold by others. Or even list the features and benefits
of the line of manicure tables you offer.
#2 - Substituting Keywords for Generic Terms
This technique (just like the one above) is perfectly fine IF you use
it in moderation. However, to replace every instance of a generic term
with a keyphrase will cause your copy to sound downright silly. Let's
have a look at an example from a Web design site.
New Orleans Web Design
Our New Orleans Web design firm offers a high level of creativity
to businesses located in the general area. Our New Orleans Web
design styles are never made from templates. Each New Orleans Web
design is a custom creation just for your site.
If you walked into a Web design company's office and the employees
began to talk like that copy is written, you'd most likely think they
were on drugs! So why in the world would you write your site copy that
way? The reason is because most amateurs mistakenly think they can't
write for both the search engines and the site visitors. I'm delighted
to say they are wrong! You can most certainly write for both with great
success.
Try this:
Progressive, creative, upbeat. Those are phrases that best
describe many online businesses based in New Orleans. Web design for
your organization should match your style. Never created from
templates, the site designs you'll receive will be truly reflective
of your corporate personality. Because we work exclusively with
companies located in or near New Orleans, Web designs retain that
Big Easy feel.
Did you see it? The phrase was broken up using punctuation. That
won't hurt your rankings one bit, but it will make your copy sound a LOT
better.
These are not all the mistakes. I wish they were! But most of the
mistakes made by amateur writers can be fixed using one simple test.
Read it out loud. If the copy sounds ridiculous to you when you read it
out loud, it is going to sound equally ridiculous to a site visitor.
Take your time. Learn the ins and outs of SEO copywriting before you
begin to create the text for your (or your clients') pages. Then you can
rest assured that your copy will convert better while it contributes to
your high rankings.
Copyright 2006, Karon Thackston, All Rights Reserved
Karon is Owner and CEO of Marketing Words, Inc. who offers
targeted copywriting, copy editing & ezine article services.
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