2. Create a catchy headline that accurately summarizes your press
release. Your press release's headline can be one line or have a
subheading as well. Just remember you are competing against hundreds of
other press releases on the editor's desk. When editors do not have time
to sit and read every single press release that comes in, they sometimes
just take a glance at the headline. It is very important to have a
headline gets their attention so they start reading. Work on the headline
because it is just as important as the body of the press release. While
you should make your headline interesting and intriguing, make sure it has
something to do with the contents of the press release. Using a headline
like "Free Trip to Bermuda" when your press release is about
your organic baby food company is not appropriate unless you are giving
away free trips to Bermuda to your customers, and even then that headline
should be revised.
3. Compose the body of your press release. A short (3-4
paragraphs), newsworthy press release will grab the attention of editors,
which will in turn get you publicity-and for only the cost of emailing,
faxing or mailing the release. The release has to highlight the uniqueness
of your business-what differentiates you from your competitors. If you
can't think of a unique thing about your company-wait until you can before
you send out the release.
Here are a few newsworthy topics to write about in your release:
1. Grand Opening/Re-Opening of your business, e.g. an
interesting story about why/how you started your company and the target
market of your business.
2. The results of a recent survey your company created, e.g.
provide the results of the survey to the news media.
3. Tie Your Company to an Upcoming Holiday, e.g. a company that
makes Hawaiian lays in National Luau month or if you work at home and it's
Home Based Business week.
4. A strategic partnership that your company has formed: e.g.
Annabelle's Organic Baby Food has formed an alliance with Shannon's Baby
Gift Baskets.
5. Include a short, concise company profile or business owner bio at
the bottom of the release. If the editors have never heard about your
company, this is the place to give them some additional background
information or to give them your standard company description.
After writing your release, edit it and re-edit it. Get rid of words
that are not necessary. Make sure the sentences are easy to read and even
easier to understand. Use strong and lively words in your release. Format
your press release to be double-spaced on one page and at the end of the
release type "# # #" so the editors know they have reached the
end of your press release. Remember when you distribute the press release
to only distribute it to publications where the readers would be
interested in your subject and make sure the release is real news and not
an advertisement.
Dana Victoria Sophia, a small business
consultant/coach and publicist to women entrepreneurs across the country,
actively assists women in achieving their business goals through her
website for small business coaching (www.DanaSophia.com)
and her website for small business public relations (www.SophiaPR.com).
She can be reached at (800) 249-3346 or Dana@SophiaPR.com.